Yes..very confusing..But that is what makes it great...

Chris

5/5

wow Great work! This poem is really neat and creative! I didn't find it confusing! Excellent job! Keep on writting:o)
Shannon

This was really good! :) Great job, hun! Keep it up and take care.

God bless you!!! =)

i must agree! it's a really cool poem, i liked it very much:)...good work!!
hope u have time to read my poems too. keep writing!:)

awesome poem, love it.. i can relate keep writing, you're awesome.. big fan lol