Wow, this confused me lol.
I think it needs a little help in explaining it, even if its just a few lines at the end, or better not try add in lines to help it more, to make it stand out.
the flow was good at times but seemed a bit forced at times, and you have no idea how happy I am to find a poem of yours that isn't f**king excellent its a releif to know your human lol

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