My life is going down hill

by tIrEd BoY wItH wIrEd EyEs   Feb 11, 2005


I think life is a roller coaster it gos up till you drop you don't when its going to stop you'll drop till it breaks and you die you'll see all the bad thing you've done flash before your eyes before you go to hell then satin will pick the worst and you'll live that moment for the rest of your after life.

by David

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  • 19 years ago

    by GoddessOfWings

    Ooooh, this is a vey dark and depressing poem, i love it. I like the way you explain life as a roller coaster, it's very creative. Keep writing.
    Gurdy x (GoddessOfWings)

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