This is excellent. beautiful text and imageries (as usual) and the names of the heros you portray through the piece add a connection within the lines. the symbols are lovely, and I love the way you displayed irony at the end of the third stance. I also really admire the way you displayed the inner-most worship, respect and admiration the narrator feels twords these people and the depth in wich you portrayed it. Beautifully done, excellent job*

Maybe it's the classical historian in me, but I REALLY like this poem.