by Iyla
I think you should call it " my entire world" but the decision is up to you. i think this is a very sad poem and i'm sorry to hear about your loss. I hope that someday you and your love will be reunited. |
Wow that was a very sad poem, but the words were very touching. It's weird cause I had a friend named Katie Smith and she was killed in a car accident too. Stay strong!! |
I'm so sorry she's gone Nick, I wish I could help you get revenge...I'm sorry hun...This was beautifully written, really, I bet she would love it, and I bet she is proud that you are hanging on. You're so incredible hun, I love you so much, believe no other, please. I love you. <333 Stay strong please, I need you angel boy. <33 xxxxxxx |
by EpithetPoet
I really dont know what to say. It was such a beautiful emotional poem and it will preserve her memory. |
by Avellana
i'm so sorry, he'll have that guilt with im his whole life, what bout... the void? no forget that, it's not good enuf. i hope you find peace. lv A, x |
This is amazing Nick....its so great. I love you so much hun, you're my angel....please hold tight |
hey my love...I was able to get on today, but you aren't here, so Im going to leave you a message. You want to hear what an idiot I am? I was blowing up a heart balloon to stick in my bedroom, and it blew up in my eye. So now I have a huge freakin bruise, i can't open my eye, and I can't stop crying...smart of me eh? |
Thats horrible. Beautiful poem ... It speaks really well of the aftermath, and the pain after the grief, the hate after the heartache of losing someone you love. Revenge is sweet, but never ends the way you want it to. |
by Lola Granny
So sry to hear of your loss on someone that has taken her life i think a proper name for the untitled should be called sweet revenge |
by Lola Granny
So sry to hear of your loss on someone that has taken her life i think a proper name for the untitled should be called sweet revenge |
Hey my love...i know this is like my 3rd comment on this poem....but I had to tell you to have a happy Valentines day!! I love you so much...sorry I missed you this weekend...hope it went great!! |
And here comes comment number 4...I promise you, this will be the last one on this poem!! But you're not online, and I have good news for you...I went and got my grades today, and i only have 1 d...so my dad lightened up...and I am grounded from everything but the intenet for right now...which is all I wanted back, cuz I wanted to talk to you!!! So i have it for 1/2 hour on Sunday-Thursday, and then an hour friday and Saturday...I'm happy...thats better than nothing...right?? |
by Lyss is dead
another great poem. keep it up |
by Hurtingsoul
i think im your new fan any way incredible poem sorry for your friend katie if that happened to me the driver would be dead by now |
by Noelle k.
sad poem... he will see his day, i'm sure he thinks about what he did everyday. i'm very sorry about your loss.good poem. 5 |