very beautiful writing.. made me a lil teary eyed..

Holy shit that was good...this is how me and my boi omarr are, if he wasnt living this life with me you know damn well i aint gon be stickin round much longer...great work tho, got me all teared up and shit, it was jus awesome!!!...lotta love, peace - Erika

i love this. this is very sweet yet sad this kinda reminds me of an old friend ilke it and keep writing or typeing

wow...haha..and amazing poem..very very sad...you made me cry..amazing..keep on writting

this is one of the best poems i have ever read in my life and i loved it every word. just amazing keep it up your an amazing poet

Hey I really liked this poem... and thanks for commenting on mine...

i love this poem i have given this sight to a lot of my friends and they have read this they love it we all gave you 5 out of 5!

OH MY GOD !!!!!!! that was AMAZING ! i dont know what to say !! but i enjoyed ur writing as i was like watching a romantic sad movie ! AMAZING !

keep them up : )

Give ya 5

Peace,
Darla

WOW that was an awsome poem..i give it a 10 out 5 lol...i loved it keep up the good work and i'll be waiting to read more of ur poems..

your an amazing writer i got so into this as i was reading it really touched my heart sucha sad story.

oh my god! i almost cried! this is such an amazing poem it truly deserves a 10! you are an awesome writer i love this poem; its sweet and sad, but mixed up together it makes a great poem! keep i up! LoVeS & PeAcEz
crystal

beautiful

I liked this poem. It was real nice, Keep writing. When you can, please read my new poem “Love”. I would appreciate it if you could rate and comment. Thanks in advance. I REALLY appreciate it.

hey i really liked that poem! let me know how you think i'm doing i'd really like to know!! hope to see ur comment

~!Brittany!~

omg that is like the best poem ever!! it is so sad. it is so touching!! your a great writer.

love paige and patsy

how could this be a 4.6? its way to good.... i just dont under stand all this?

WOW!!! this poem is totally awsome. It is sweet but sad at the same time. keep up the good work. Always believe in love and trust in God!!
-Britt

Very good poem, it was written very well.

Omg its so sad!! lol its really awsome though!

Really good. You're very talented!