By far one of the best poems ever!

Omg...this is sooo sad. i can feel the pain so much. i almost started crying while i was reading this!

Very good poem, I really enjoyed it, Great work, 5/5.

Omg!!!

I have to say that was the greatest poem i have ever read> I don't care about these award winning poem but yours should be right up there. I will say as a critic ididnt like how some didnt rhyme. Overall amazing i still have tears on the edge of my eyes. 5/5

WOW!!!! This poem made me cry and really made me think about the wonderful guy i have in my life. I hope this ins't true. But this was a great poem. Keep up the good work. 5/5

xoxoxo
jess

I really like this poem its really good !!! cheak mine out some time and commet them thanx!
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Wow, Really Nice. Keep On Working, It Is Really Good .. :)

Really one of those, or the best story-poem ever made. The story was typical, the content was way unique. Filled with emotions, with feelings. The author is great. Congratulations.

What a poem good job

Nice poem! Love It!!

This is a very sad poem. It got me crying.

WOW.... THAT WAS INTENSE U DID A REALLY GOOD JOB I ALMOST CRYED READING IT U HAVE A GIFT

Wow... is that enough to express my thoughts and feelings? i guess not, but I'm speechless

The last stanza is a sadistic twist! she died but its ok kind of thing idk i love how you did that though : )
great job long poem but i didn't even notice till i had to scroll back up to the top ! you made it flow nicely i hope it isn't true thought : / that would be sad
5/5 of course!