Very good ending line, i wish i could end poems like that. That is how poems should be ended. i lack that sense to end a poem like that.

Great JOB!!!

Five/Five

Oh my gosh! I don't even know what to say to that...I'm speechless, and if you know me, that hardly ever happens! I am sooo sorry that you lost your brother, especially like that...I can't even begin to relate....but very nicely written...