This is the world as we know it today

by Desiree   Feb 11, 2005


This world has gotten so cold.

Love has come unhinged.

The friendships we thought would always last has now come to an end.

Everything we have gained is now gone.

The ones we love the most have passed on.

This is the world as we know it today.

our dreams of tomorrow seem so far away.

Those who have pride in their country wind
up dead.
so am I next?

Religious bonds are broken.

Things that need to be said are left unspoken.

I feel my freedom slowly slipping away.

This is the world as we know it today.

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  • 19 years ago

    by HOLLY ARMER

    Desiree~
    I love the line "Love has come unhinged" very unique!
    I think in the 3rd line you need to change has to have!
    Also, in the 8th line "wined up dead" should be "wind up dead"!
    You've got a lot of talent, just keep writing and you'll improve naturally! If you ever need any input, just e-mail me~Holly

  • 19 years ago

    by Nicole♥

    GOOD WRITING. PLEASE COME AND VOTE&COMMENT MY POEMS SOMEWTIME. THANKS
    ..XOXO..

  • 19 years ago

    by Desiree

    i wrote this after 9-11 right after

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