Memory Within the Dawn

by HOLLY ARMER   Feb 11, 2005


Just let go...don't hold on.
I'll be a memory within the dawn.

Someone you knew for only a while.
An enchanting girl that made you smile.

Fate is cruel, we're not meant to be.
You want her, you don't want me.

But being your friend causes me pain.
Seeing you with her drives me insane.

So hug me once, lets say goodbye.
Pay no attention to the tears I cry.

Just let me go, please don't hold on.
And I'll be a memory within the dawn.

*I know this could be better, I'm fighting writers block and this was kinda forced. Any suggestions would be appreciated!

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  • 19 years ago

    by Dead As Yesterday

    Holly this one was great...5/5 I found it very relatable and rather well written I like the rhyming (reminds me of someone lol)
    Dave......

  • 19 years ago

    by Miss Krueger

    Very good. So real. Deep thoughts- Miss Krueger

  • 19 years ago

    by Timothy

    It was good, but since u asked, I say that we all sometimes take the "be-me" and "fight-plight" route. You know what I'm saying? Simple words that rhyme that come to our heads and we just use them, and after the work is done, we think: Well, it's not bad, but it's no Shakespere either. LOL.

  • 19 years ago

    by Ann Stareyes

    Another good one. If you have writer's block send me a little of it. A beautiful poem once again. 5 all the way. Great job. lol

  • 19 years ago

    by Heather M Craig

    its good Holly! or at least i thought it was very deserving of a 5!!
    Great hunz
    love Heather.

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