its good Holly! or at least i thought it was very deserving of a 5!!
Great hunz
love Heather.

Another good one. If you have writer's block send me a little of it. A beautiful poem once again. 5 all the way. Great job. lol

It was good, but since u asked, I say that we all sometimes take the "be-me" and "fight-plight" route. You know what I'm saying? Simple words that rhyme that come to our heads and we just use them, and after the work is done, we think: Well, it's not bad, but it's no Shakespere either. LOL.

Very good. So real. Deep thoughts- Miss Krueger

Holly this one was great...5/5 I found it very relatable and rather well written I like the rhyming (reminds me of someone lol)
Dave......