Comments : Never: The Story of a "Good Girl"

  • 19 years ago

    by *~*Soldier Lover*~*

    the 'good girl' reputation is hard to beat. trust me I know. there are some perks though. good poem, honest, and very true. you did a good job with the theme. but the end seems to not flow with the rest of them poem.....
    *~*Soldier Lover*~*

    oh and could you please, please, read my new poem 'Onion'? thanx!!

  • 19 years ago

    by Kia

    that's a good poem.... does this girl really exist.... or is that jus the show that she puts on for people... great poem