Lost angel
by tIrEd BoY wItH wIrEd EyEs Feb 11, 2005
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I'm a lost angel trying to find the steps to heaven but it is leading me to the doors of hell there they wait for me to come but i always turn away i try to help but i cant help i always mess up I've seen hanging bodies and blood filled rooms i have heard the screams of the fallen angles come down on me I'm a lost angel going in the wrong direction but soon enough ill make it to the steps of heaven |
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17 years ago
by KIMMY
IT IS A GOOD POEM!! BUT I THINK THAT YOU REALLY MEANT IT!!! IT SEEMS LIKE YOU WROTE IT FOR THE HELL OF IT!!! BUT KEEP TRYING!!!
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17 years ago
Very well written, although I can't get over the non-use of comma's and periods. Ah well, I'll get over, the use of it being a short story is very intriguing. Haven't seen that type of style in a while. Keep up the good work ^_^x
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17 years ago
Thanks for commenting mine, I really loved this poem. Its actually one I can compare my life to. Keep up the good writing, and message me or something.
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18 years ago
by Eraklis
Loved the whole lost angel theme great work, dark with meaning...Amazing
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19 years ago
by R F
loooooooool...u made my eyse roll up...niiiice writing but pleeeeeeeeease put some things like those ,,,,,,,,,,
Lool,u have ur style !!! i like it
Peace
Darla
