This Life of Mine

You give me no time to say what's on my mind or to tell you how I feel

I'll kill myself and deal with death before I shed somemore tears

I cry each night cause I want to fight this control you have over me

I have tried so hard this time not tolet you bring me to my knees and let you keep on hurting me

This life of mine is hard and has so much pain this life of mine is what makes me want to die and never come back again.

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