I really liked it. Very good. Keep on writing.

Very well written, thank you for the kind comment, you are a very talented writer...if you keep up the comments and wonderful poems, i will add you to my faves as well...i think for a young man your age you're very skilled...i love the structure and words used *5

God bless
love Heather

wow you are so amazing. youre such a good poet. If you ever wanna talk my s/n is lyssxo928 and my email is alyssaangel67@verizon.net

alyssa

Hello Darky !

a really great poem i just read ! your words were soo affective n so powerful !

i loved the part u said "This is my Cross to Bare!" wow soo powerful !

i loved it all with its parts ! Briliant !
Give ya 5 ! enjoy it.

Peace,
Darla