wow so sweet i loved the first part great poem its heaps kool! awsome poem your talented! >>5/5<<
bec xXx

beautiful poem! very very expressive! keep writing :)

take care, 5! always believe in love

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♥ amit ♥

wow, that was a really good poem, the rhyming and wording was great. very effective and emotional, keep writing xxxx