Wow, this was so emotional! I loved it. Great job, bud! :)

This is different from your other poems but it was still good nontheless. I like the last stanza, it made the poem become whole and more understandable. Good job mate :).
-A

Beautiful way to put across the pain of tears...glad that you posted it....take care and Happy Valentine...FIVE>>>

It was NOT a piece of junk! I loved it! Very good! Take Care~

this is SOOO not junk. its wonderful
theres a lot of emotion in it! its beautiful!
youre ingenious. i dont know how yo could call anything of yours JUNK
<3 jenn

i do not understand how you could call anything you do junk.
you are an utter genius.

i only wish i could be as good as you.
<3 jenny