Hmm I wonder where the moral came from for this one? lol. Great poem tho... I don't think you should be dissatisfied with it one bit. |
by Dark Savior
it was a good poem and it seemed to conva a good message. Just some parts are REALLY good others are so so. |
by R F
Excellent work girl ! Enjoy your 5 |
by Dorotea©
excellent! i like the idea of it too, because it's true. I gave you a 5 |
by Bogie
Your poem is a very good write, |
by Cheyanne
Wow, nice poem! =] |
by Ann Stareyes
Once again a very great poem. So much meaning and brought forth a great message. Beautiful job, once again. lol |
by christina
wow great peom hunz i loved and i really liked the mesg it was great :D |
i like this one keep on writin |
by HOLLY ARMER
I think it is excellently written! Very insightful! Keep it up~Holly |