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by Jomar Bautista
It was nice although short it really tells how one person feels. Great work!!!=)
by Ironic Allure
I don't like this one as much as your other poem, few little points that could make your flow a little better: 'I'm going insane, All I feel is pain, This is no longer a game, My heart is to blame.' Try.. 'I'm going insane, All I feel is pain, No longer a game, My heart is to blame.' And.. 'I'm stuck on you like glue, Look what it's come to, Whatever you do, I'll fight for you, I will fight for you.' Try.. 'Stuck to you like glue, Look what it's come to, Whatever you do, I'll fight for you, I will fight for you.' ..Apart from those teeny weeny things, I think It's lovely. Short and sweet. Well done, take care of yourself. All my love, Laura.