~thank you for the comment first and foremost~

Read this lil profile of yours, so you believe you're not good @ poetry? Most times I just tell people they are what they believe they are but when I read this poem, I realized I got much more to say:)

Well, like Pete said, perfect imagery...I felt like I was there, you caught me in your poem (hard thing to do but u did it hunz) and also, you're creative, you used a wide range of vocabulary which is great for your age! my only suggestion to you would be shorten your lines up a bit when writing because often, readers lose interest but this poem was amazing Kady!! don't you ever stop writing or i'mma come and get ya! lol j/k!

God bless
love HMC

Hey, this is really good...it came frum the heart...keep it up and take care...
~Luv Alwayz Knoxy