Short but great poem:) Keep it up! Thnx for the comment! God Bless! *5/5* Tell me when you have wrote another poem!!! Oh almost forgot to tell you "Welcome" to the site!!! :D..lol..

-x-Sedusha-x-

yer its good bit short and i think that u could make it ryhme a bit more but is fab:)

No offence but...thats a poem 0__o for me this looks like a life lesson, some words of early wisdom in a poetic from lol! nah I'm just kidding you well done, I do hope to see however some longer poems from you soon hun! lol get the head working lol

Well done
Jenn

Short and swweta nd too the point i like

Short but true 5/5 i like the way you write your poetry

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~NinjaGirl~