by KENNY Feb 12, 2005
category :
Sadness, depression /
about depression
This is for the kids who hide things from their friends who tell lies to cover things and who say they are writing about nothing in particular but when you go to read it they have to go because they wear long selves all year long to hide their arms and their counselors tell them they they don't have to hide but really were not hiding we don't have a true color we don't have personalties we are who we are |
by Trisha
i like this. its so true. i didnt wear long sleeves all year- i always hid the cuts but never hid the scars...but yeah. i like this. i tried to lie to my best friend about it, but she knows me through and through. anyway, 5/5 dude. you should check out some of mine. :) |
Just because it doesnt ryme that doesnt mean its not poetry,, your poem is so true, keep writing, i wanna read more.. |