The Dumps

by Finalgravedigger   Feb 12, 2005


Have you ever felt like you've been in every dump in the world

At every holes of holes and you just keep getting in deeper and deeper

The lights Fading and the darkness grows forever more
until no one can see you forever more.

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  • 17 years ago

    by NinjaGirl

    Nice poem 5/5 i really liked the last two lines

    "The lights Fading and the darkness grows forever more
    until no one can see you forever more."

    xD
    ~NinjaGirl~

  • 17 years ago

    by shatteredsoul

    I know I have!

  • 17 years ago

    by jack

    Wow, yh i have felt like that. i got through it though with the help of god. great poem keep it up
    5/5 check out my poems.

  • 17 years ago

    by Jessica

    I like this one it kind of relates to many people 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by Gary Jurechka

    I like what you are saying here, though the repeat of 'forever more' in the last stanza makes the flow a bit awkward as does the 's' on the first holes in the second stanza(just my opinion).But the emotion/sentiment you convey is spot on-I, and many, can definitely relate.The brevity fits it perfectly, says just enough, and so much.Nice job.

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