My Love Poem

by ReenIe   Feb 12, 2005


Love is all the times you called me back.

Love is all the times your eyes lit up when we talked.

Love is the way you looked at me.

Love is the way you would always smile when I was around.

Love is when you wiped the ice cream off my nose and laughed.

Love is simple. Which is why I live to love. No, love was simple.

Love was simple until you told me no.

Love was simple until your hands were around my neck.

Love was simple until you placed a dagger against my heart.

Love was simple until blood was running down my face.

Love was simple until you kicked me in my stomach.

Love was simple until you twisted my wrist.

Love was...... you and me.

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  • 19 years ago

    by ŦōüċhÌήğ ỀνĬĽ

    Wow..this poem was really good! Keep your head up!:o) Excellent work!
    ~Touching Evil~
    --Shannon--

  • 19 years ago

    by ElegantlyWasted

    You are very clear and consise in the words you've used in this poem. Congrats on a great poem and thanks for the comment - it means alot.

    ;;-- Kalah

  • 19 years ago

    by Taylor

    great poem! i love it! i can understand everything! keep it up!

    Love, Taylor

  • 19 years ago

    by Dark Savior

    Very graphic portrayal of something like this . But it was a good poem and i enjoyed it.

    I think you need to work abit on your structure...but if that is the way you are used to things then i say continue, no sense is messing with a good thing, right?

    It was a good way of expressing a bad situation...i like to read bad situations now.

    Five/Five

    P.S. Thank you so very much for your comment on my poem..it meant a lot.

  • 19 years ago

    by S

    damn..i kno u feel girl. keep ya head up. another guy will come around who's 10x's better. just think, this guy was the wrong one and look how he made u feel when things were ok. just think of how mr. right is gonna make u feel. i gave u a 5. keep up the good work. :)

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