i liked it its how i feel but lpve is not simple

damn..i kno u feel girl. keep ya head up. another guy will come around who's 10x's better. just think, this guy was the wrong one and look how he made u feel when things were ok. just think of how mr. right is gonna make u feel. i gave u a 5. keep up the good work. :)

Very graphic portrayal of something like this . But it was a good poem and i enjoyed it.

I think you need to work abit on your structure...but if that is the way you are used to things then i say continue, no sense is messing with a good thing, right?

It was a good way of expressing a bad situation...i like to read bad situations now.

Five/Five

P.S. Thank you so very much for your comment on my poem..it meant a lot.

great poem! i love it! i can understand everything! keep it up!

Love, Taylor

You are very clear and consise in the words you've used in this poem. Congrats on a great poem and thanks for the comment - it means alot.

;;-- Kalah

Wow..this poem was really good! Keep your head up!:o) Excellent work!
~Touching Evil~
--Shannon--