by Saravana Kumar S Feb 12, 2005
category :
Love, romance /
lasting love
The happiness of being together,the sadness of being apart, |
luv it. keep it up kumar~!!~ its nice to meet another indian writter here~!!~ |
by Red Charm
Great poem |
wow so true and sweet filled with the highs and lows of love brilliant work! >>5/5<< |
by nandini
ur concluding stanza's are always really cool.....i like them a lot for all the poems.....very catchy....they return ur attention back to the starting of ur poem and u end up reading it again and again.....well done. take care!!! |
this is such a sad poem. you captured the edge of unrequinted love. knowing they are the one for you and wantiing them, but they dont want you. good job capturing the pain and love and loneliness of that kind of love. great job!! |