beautiful poem, kumar! just amazing! you write very well! :)

take care, 5 for this one!

Oh Kumar, Absolutely BEAUTIFUL! There's nothing else that I can say. Written with perfection, my friend. I enjoy your poems so much. lol

O my...hehe.. Strong message, Kumar!! Sweet Blessings to you & for you to have happiness!! Great-Passionate Work;) --Hugs to you-- *5/5* ..muahz... lol.. haha!

-x-Sedusha-x-
*I'm going to be posting soon,
Just letting you know:D*

I loved this kumar.. It dug deep inside. I only wish that more people could read and feel this excellent job.

i luv it i luv it........
anagha

Kumar, I've already commented on this beautiful poem but I forgot to mention. I'll be off the site for a little while. I have to take my computer back to the technician. I wanted you to know I was O.k. I'll catch up on things when I return. Take Care, my friend, Love ya bunches, Ann

awww i like that so keep up the great work!!

this is such a sad poem. you captured the edge of unrequinted love. knowing they are the one for you and wantiing them, but they dont want you. good job capturing the pain and love and loneliness of that kind of love. great job!!
*~*Soldier Lover*~*

ur concluding stanza's are always really cool.....i like them a lot for all the poems.....very catchy....they return ur attention back to the starting of ur poem and u end up reading it again and again.....well done. take care!!!

wow so true and sweet filled with the highs and lows of love brilliant work! >>5/5<<
bec xXx

Great poem

luv it. keep it up kumar~!!~ its nice to meet another indian writter here~!!~
keep it up
5/5

thanks for reading my poems. it means a lot to me. thanks again~!!~