Our First Dance
by Ann Stareyes Feb 12, 2005
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When you held me in your arms, And we danced the night away, In your eyes I saw Love, In such a passionate way.*** As your arms embraced me, You whispered in my ear, "I Love You Sweetie, I'll never bring you tears."*** Then you held me more gently, And kissed my sweet lips, Nibbled at my ear, And I didn't want you to quit.*** We danced through out the night, And we shared our dreams, This was the moment, I was so happy I wanted to scream.*** We danced our blues away, And you have brought me joy, Thank You My Love, For being a true Man instead of a Boy!!*** |
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19 years ago
by ChildofGod87
hehe... no offends, I loved this poem, but something about..eh.. maybe it's just me!! lol.. Anyways, this was quite pleasant & unique piece, Ann! Well Done! God Bless! Have a wonderful Valentine!! --Hugs to you-- *5/5*..
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*I'm going to be posting a new poem soon, but I'm just telling you to let you know:D* lol... Take of yourself;)* -
19 years ago
by Amit
beautiful poem, with lovely rhyme! good job, keep it up :) sure, a 5!
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19 years ago
passionate poem...nicely written...take care and keep smiling...FIVE>>>
