I completly admired it. I love the whole symbolism, "aim for the moon-retrieve the stars" that's just so beautifully written. And your repetition technique was perfectly used. i loved how you created the notion of aiming for something so lovely but not able to reach it, yet at the end having a little something beautiful to hold on to together. Lovely job

Very good, I like it. Take care.
-nick

Excellent !!!

very creative n got a new style girl !very interesting,n i liked ur NIckname too,lol

i loved the last part,i felt it was suportive n about never giving up on something ! smart one.

Peace,
Darla