Comments : Distracted In Dreams

  • 19 years ago

    by Carmen

    Wow... that was beautiful, but making every word begin with a capital letter made it kind of confusing.

  • 19 years ago

    by Ann Stareyes

    Heather, Another great poem. I loved every single line especially: Distracted in Beautiful Dreams, Divine Dreams Of You, I Could Wait Forever As Long As, The Dreams Were To Come True. Beautifully written and so sweet. lol

  • 19 years ago

    by Cheyanne

    Aww, this is just sweet and beautiful.I loved it! =D

  • 19 years ago

    by Marques Sawyer

    very very good one of ur best ones keep it up

  • 19 years ago

    by Amit

    wow! very very beautiful poem!!! ur a good poet!!! u r now in my favs. :)

    take care, 5! always believe in love

    dont forget to vote for my poem knock knock! nidhi has come,

    ♥ amit ♥

  • 19 years ago

    by HOLLY ARMER

    Distracted in Beautiful Dreams...that is an amazing thought! I loved the last stanza! Spectacular stuff~Holly

  • 19 years ago

    by Minkus

    This poem is really good, I love it.

    Thanks for your comments on Pain- I like that one too. But of course, I like almost all my own poems-:P Thanks though.

  • 19 years ago

    by disquiet thoughts

    really nice. esp the title of the poem. lurve it ! (:

  • 19 years ago

    by Queen Marlene

    wow. thats beautiful. keep writing.