I know what you mean, but no matter what things do get better, I know from expirance, hold in there everything will work out! Anyway, bravo on the poem!

this is a very painful poem. you really have a talent for writing about pain.
*~*Soldier Lover*~*

u'r good at describing pain..u remind me of Nala (no offence) :P but yeah..does she like u or something?
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you hit the nail on the head!

beautiful.

i agree...best you've written!! God bless

love Heather.

hey i thought you did a great job one this one.

This was really something great work. Im feeling it right now but we have to be strong in order to survive thats the way it is =( Still Great work!!! 5/5 =)

This is such a great poem!! So excellent! I love these lines...

Impossible to describe
To those who haven’t felt it

This is so true. You cannot explain the feelings of deep sadness and depression to anyone who has not felt it. It is impossible. You are so talented, keep it up.

Love always,
Tiff

I love this poem. TONS of people feel this way. I know I have. Sometimes I still do...by some of my writing you might be able to tell...Neways thanks for the comment. 3>jess

Oh yeah, how do you register to get into contests? Lemme know. thanks. 3>jess

once again a great poem 2 thumbs way way up good job.

I liked this one...I can totally relate...nice job...luv yas mwah

-kayla-

Very insightful words here. This almost felt as if it was your thought process on this subject and amazingly it worked! It comes out as a clever and well crafted piece of poetry. Well Done
Sondos