by Unrequited Feb 13, 2005
category :
Sadness, depression /
lost relationships
Touch me |
I truly love that...amazing...the end, the last line threw me off a little...I'm not completely sure I know what you're talking about...deep and powerful...I applaud you. |
What a powerful poem, brilliant!!! You have so much talent in writing, just keep them coming!!!! I love this poem as well as the other, very emotional and strongly written... |
by Rolo
Very unique style, but it fit the story perfectly. The structure also added to the intensity. Very nice. It was a joy to read some of your work. I hope you never stop writing. Good luck and take care. |
by Weeping Wolf
whoa...this was amazing work, absolutly extroadinary. This is the first poem of yours i've read and you've pulled me so now i have read them all! thx for the comments on my poems, if u want to be friends my myspace is www.myspace.com/1ay1a |
by shannon
really really good..you have a talent..keep it up..5/5 |