Pain of the living

by Unrequited   Feb 13, 2005


The pain remains the same
it will not quiet down
and when I wonder why i’m here
you give me the answer
and it becomes so clear

the God will call to me
and say i’m almost there
the best is yet to come

the rejection cuts into me
yet i’m still standing here
waiting for your words
that try to kill me off
yet i’m still standing here

then God will call to me
and say i’m almost there
the burning won’t last long

the coldness in my heart
keeps me awake at night
why won’t you warm me up
and cure my breaking heart

then God calls to me
and says my pain is done
and i will be no more

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  • 19 years ago

    by Natalie84

    I really like this...though I think the 2nd and 4th stanzas stopped abruptly. I think that took away from the flow a little.

    “the coldness in my heart
    keeps me awake at night
    why won’t you warm me up
    and cure my breaking heart”
    That was my favorite part….I love this stanza! You should capitalize where necessary.

    Nice write! :)

  • 19 years ago

    by The Secret Keeper

    Great Poem... I'm terrible at reviewing but i reall did like it... keep writing..
    ~Meg

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