Great Poem... I'm terrible at reviewing but i reall did like it... keep writing..
~Meg

I really like this...though I think the 2nd and 4th stanzas stopped abruptly. I think that took away from the flow a little.

“the coldness in my heart
keeps me awake at night
why won’t you warm me up
and cure my breaking heart”
That was my favorite part….I love this stanza! You should capitalize where necessary.

Nice write! :)