Im done

by Marques Sawyer   Feb 13, 2005


I'm done with this so called love
I'm done with saying the i love you
I'm done with all the hugs

i don't know why i said yes
i don't know why i believed you
i don't know why i stayed in this as long as i did....

its over i don't want to see again
its finished my heart says no more
Ive cried to many tears over this so called relationship

I'm headed for the breakdown
you through our life away
you weren't there to break my fall

I'm done with you

I'm done.........

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  • 19 years ago

    by Mimi112

    I really liked this poem a lot ! I liked the repetitions at the beginning of the verses and the end is quite expressive. It's really nice. I'm happy you finally wrote a new poem !! waiting for more SOON ;) thanx a lot for commenting ! you deserve a 5/5 !!

  • 19 years ago

    by Heather M Craig

    Awe, such a heartbreaking poem, dont give up in love, you never know what you will find!! Someones gonna treat you good like you deserve and gonna love you equally than all you put out there!! until then jus keep loving that person starin back at you from the mirror, you're gonna find thats the greatest love of all! And always remember each one that breaks your heart is jus another step to strengthen who you are!! God bless U~ love ya!

    love Heather M Craig

  • 19 years ago

    by Amit

    expressive, and sad! very well done. keep writing :)

    take care, 5! always believe in love

    dont forget to vote for my poem knock knock! nidhi has come,

    ♥ amit ♥

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