expressive, and sad! very well done. keep writing :)

take care, 5! always believe in love

dont forget to vote for my poem knock knock! nidhi has come,

♥ amit ♥

Awe, such a heartbreaking poem, dont give up in love, you never know what you will find!! Someones gonna treat you good like you deserve and gonna love you equally than all you put out there!! until then jus keep loving that person starin back at you from the mirror, you're gonna find thats the greatest love of all! And always remember each one that breaks your heart is jus another step to strengthen who you are!! God bless U~ love ya!

love Heather M Craig

I really liked this poem a lot ! I liked the repetitions at the beginning of the verses and the end is quite expressive. It's really nice. I'm happy you finally wrote a new poem !! waiting for more SOON ;) thanx a lot for commenting ! you deserve a 5/5 !!