by Driven Soul Feb 13, 2005
category :
Love, romance /
love is
The warm tingly, sensation that I had in my chest |
Very good, very good you don't need to improve nothing just write what you feel, and believe me it's great. |
BRILLANT! Very well written and so incredible! I felt it in my heart. |
by Amit
beautiful poem, some good use of rhymes! keep writing :) |