Only You

by Hannah Leigh Pate   Feb 13, 2005


When you look at me, I feel weak in the knees.
When you talk to me, I feel like all is at ease.
When you embrace me, I feel a shiver go up my spine.
When I look at you, I can’t help but smile every time.

All you seem to me,
Is all I want you to be.
All I seem to you,
Is but another friend too.

There is so much about you that I adore,
Your eyes, your humor, and so much more.
You make me seem like what I never knew I could be.
You make me glad…I only wish you felt the same for me.

It’s only you whom I see.
Only you whom I want for me.
I’m finally able to sincerely say,
I love you, forever and a day.

^I think it might need to be revised a litte...but I haven't decided if I will or not.

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  • 19 years ago

    by Rebecca

    Great poem! I loved it!
    If ya wanna check out some of my poems and tell me whatcha think...
    Keep up the good work & I look forward to reading more of your stuff!

    God bless
    Rebecca.

  • 19 years ago

    by Bizarre

    i think it's good as is.
    great job.

  • 19 years ago

    by *AsHLeY05*

    Awesome poem! loved it! no need to revise honestly its good the way it is! i agree! keep up the good work! 5/5!

  • 19 years ago

    by xXxIf You Only KnewxXx

    you write awesome poetry. i love it! keep writing, you're really good.

  • 19 years ago

    by jessica

    this was a great poem, your really talented, take care, and you dont need to revise it, its perfect the way it is!