Poem for the heartbroken

by Lucy Lewin   Feb 13, 2005


Whenever I see you,
you bring me down,
my heart falls apart,
and I start to frown.

I cant help if I cry,
it hurts so bad,
I'm wanting to die,
how could I be so sad?

I've loved you once,
and you hurt me bad,
I made a mistake,
you made me mad.

Here's to all the tears I cried,
and here's to all the lies you lied,
Here's to all my pain inside,
and here's to having no pride.

*plz vote and comment, this poem means alot to me. Thanx :)*

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  • 19 years ago

    by Lucy Lewin

    thanx :)

  • 19 years ago

    by ☼totalDARKNESS☼

    that was good. i was going to give it a 3, but what you wrote at the end changed my mind. i changed my mind beccause i think idf a poem means someonething to one person, it should mean something to everyone that reads it. (the reason i was only going to give it a 3 is becasue i didnt like the very last line, other wise it was perfect)

  • 19 years ago

    by ☼totalDARKNESS☼

    that was good. i was going to give it a 3, but what you wrote at the end changed my mind. i changed my mind beccause i think idf a poem means someonething to one person, it should mean something to everyone that reads it. (the reason i was only going to give it a 3 is becasue i didnt like the very last line, other wise it was perfect)

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