that was good. i was going to give it a 3, but what you wrote at the end changed my mind. i changed my mind beccause i think idf a poem means someonething to one person, it should mean something to everyone that reads it. (the reason i was only going to give it a 3 is becasue i didnt like the very last line, other wise it was perfect)

that was good. i was going to give it a 3, but what you wrote at the end changed my mind. i changed my mind beccause i think idf a poem means someonething to one person, it should mean something to everyone that reads it. (the reason i was only going to give it a 3 is becasue i didnt like the very last line, other wise it was perfect)

thanx :)