WHY?

by clevername   Feb 14, 2005


You told me it would be O.K
you told me one day I'll smile
you told me i wood live life happy
and laugh once in a while
but after time has past
I'm still looking for some way out
of all of this swollen doubt
I'm still running far and wide
with Satan as my guide
so now i ask you why
after u left this place
and ran from me without a trace
why?
why did you go ahead and lie
because now i am just left here to die
so I'll say my last goodbyes

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  • 18 years ago

    by Timothy B

    With Satan as your guide, the road is dark
    With angels as your guide, the road is bright
    With friends by your side, you are you're own guide.

  • 19 years ago

    by HJ

    Hey

    I liked it alot, I have read alot of your other stuff too and I like your style.

    You write with so much honest and raw emotion.

    Thank your for you kind comment, check out my new poem "My Monster" if you get chance. Look forward to reading more for you!!

    Kind regards
    Hayley

  • 19 years ago

    by clevername

    yah i agree with u its not one of my better! but u no! no one writes everything perfectly! :) ill check ur stuff out thanx for the comment!

  • 19 years ago

    by stephalee

    umm it was ok i think it could have been improved a little better but it was pretty good keep trying!
    ~rock on~

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