by Carmen Feb 14, 2005
category :
Sadness, depression /
about depression
The razor cuts my skin, |
Awsome poem. it was so deep and it really touched me. very well written.i loved your use of words and the rhyming. 5/5 keep up the good work. |
by Jamie
I liked this a lot another 5/5 your rhyming was almost all exact, me and bleed don't rhyme but i guess thats okay, i loved your vocab in this one awesome |
Hmm, already commented on this one... |
by Kymberly
Awsome poem! Good flow and comparison! |
What can I say? It was really a great poem. It was written well and it flows very well. True emotion shows!!=) Great work!!!=) 5/5 |