good job, good flow, good rhyme sceme...keep it up:)
take care~
Love always,
-Brytne'

this poem has great meaning. I can relate to it. This is wonderful. 5/5

This poem has a great meaning. and I can relate to it. its beautiful :) 5/5 keep writing plz thanks for ur comment on mine :)

lovely poem!! flowed great!! keep it coming!! :)

I love this poem =) very good! I voted a 5.. please check out my poem "eternal sunshine of the spotless mind" please comment and rate.. thanks a lot, hugs

Good poem!! I liked it very much!! You've captured the emotion in your words quite well ^^.
-Redd

Well I read it and it was done qute well it flowed real nice but the ending was off I feel you did not follow it up with the same rythem. All and all it held well told a story and you could picture it even though it was made from a surrendering stand point check out you want this by me I think you would like it it is really the flip side of this piece. Also check out Hold Me. this was good for starters

Another great poem! It was deep and so well written! U are a great writer! Check out some of mine if u would I have a couple new ones! Thanx! Brooke

Great and touching poem, very sad though!!! Nice flow ..... Loved it!!!

I liked the way you portaid the pain iun this real good. But I never really liked taking the position of a victem. We all get hurt but to just wrap up in a ball and just die is just senceless. At least to me. But then again I am older... I hope you see the worth in fighting not dieing. It's easy to give up its harder to live...

Nice ending.It's a very good poem, for the subject it wants to represent. Just this, is weird:My soul barely bigger than a crumb.Maybe you could try something else there.All in all, it's a nice poem

What can I say? It was really a great poem. It was written well and it flows very well. True emotion shows!!=) Great work!!!=) 5/5

Can u plz comment on my poem "My Story" thanks!!!=)

Awsome poem! Good flow and comparison!

Hmm, already commented on this one...

I liked this a lot another 5/5 your rhyming was almost all exact, me and bleed don't rhyme but i guess thats okay, i loved your vocab in this one awesome

Awsome poem. it was so deep and it really touched me. very well written.i loved your use of words and the rhyming. 5/5 keep up the good work.