OH I heard you on that one Maybeth and let me tell you I jeard your call..lately I have been feeling the same way and have put on a fake smile too and went on with life...but remeber whatever your going through 10 hundred other people have already went through it too..Keep you head up and stay smiling and bright like you always are...You always have a friend in me and Im here if you ever need to vent..Lovely poem!
ALways a fan,
~Chelsey~

Hey may, You ok? THis is so sad and i try to figure out the whole picture. i followed the story though and it was a nice write. Take care and be safe. Hope u had a beautiful val.?

aww i know the feeling of it...but dont you ever give up!! much love to you!!

love Heather.

another poweful peace, I couldnt see how someone who writes as well as you could feal so down about life. The way I see it is hey im still alive so why not enjoy it while I can. You may have some ups and downs but try to think of the good times you had and forget about the bad, for there is no reason to feal down when your breathing and many are not. Anyways... I loved the poem.

Wow. That was magnificent. Very well written, although I think the last word of the first line is suppoed to be "alone". But other than that, it was a great read. Kudos.

I felt this piece Maybeth - full of emotional turmoil and confusion - a brilliant write from you my darling! Keep it up your sis Risa xoxo

Passionate and angry. Great poem.

I felt that this poem was written with tears, and I have only one suggestion. Rewrite the first verse. I think that it could be better, I know you can make it better. Good job though.

hey great job on this poem. <3
I htink im going to start writting again.
I have a new one now but its getting craptacual rattings : ( haha oh well.
5/5
Amanda
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honest emotion with a nice flow take care

gr8 poem. i know how it feels 2 just want it 2 end. i feel it everyday. good luck. 5/5

great poem chick yet so sad! thanks for ur wonderful comment!
take care
xxxLoUxxx

That is a really good poem
It is really deep!!

A lovely emotinal poem. I really liked it!

Wow this is really good, i can see exactly how u feel, through the words u write. the words in last stanza particularly appealed to me, as i have felt like this recently, but i am sure it is not true and u r not alone :) xx

I liked this, it was very touching.

Thats really good! i feel the same. your a really good writter maybe sometime if u have time could help me out with my writting please

This is really good!