beautiful, and very well written! expressive work :) keep writing.

take care, 5! always believe in love

dont forget to vote for my poem knock knock! nidhi has come,

♥ amit ♥

Great poem! I definitly know how it feels to be afraid to lose him...but the love is worth the fear! Great job on this one, and as always...keep it up!!!

--Sierra Rae

Nice work!! Love is the centre of my world, if i lost it my world would b shattered...but i aint losing him... n im used to my world being empty!!
Keep it up.....itz pretty good...Not a huge fan of love poetry but oh well, itz just that i cant write it so i dont usually read it...lolz
Anywayz ;)

I love your work, and you express the emotion of love really well. great poem, 5/5!
*~*Soldier Lover*~*