The Long Goodbye

by Eloquent Tears   Feb 14, 2005


I have said this time after time
I know i said it before but,
Baby, my love....
I cant do this anymore.
i cannot be with you and still feel alone.
You dont take me serious
even if i change my tone.
You caused me hurt and caused me pain,
and baby, my love...
I loved you all in Vain
Holding onto you is such a stressful strain.
This is my last complain, and my last cry.
This is the very last time you have hurt this heart of mine.
This is the longest saddest...GOODBYE.

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I am, therefore i Write.
~E.T~

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  • 19 years ago

    by Jomar Bautista

    Another great poem but the line up are a little to confusing and if you can make it flow much better then it will be perfect. Still great work!! 5/5 =)

  • 19 years ago

    by Sean Allen

    pretty good, my only problem was that the irregular line length sort of threw me off from time to time as i was trying to set up a rhythm.

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