by Miss Krueger Feb 14, 2005
category :
Love, romance /
new love
Just when hope was so frail it could burst, just when clouds were so dark and came first, just when fear of loneliness became a rule, and the brightness of my days turned cruel |
i really like this poem, my favorite part is "I looked for a light in the dark, a star to light up my heart, a candle to kill all the black, a thought which made me think back" thats real! |
by Amit
this poem is really written very veery well!!! amazing work, superb! very expressive! keep writing :) |