very well written i can really relate! Nice job! Check out some of mine if your bored sometime!!

Woah, Heather this is definately one of your better poems hun. I was shocked when i read this, you have a way with words, it is amazing for someone who is only 16 to be able to write the words you do.

This poem really got down to the center of society. I really liked. I was going to write a poem like this but i just couldn't find the words to say it....all i have to say is amazing.

Five/Five

yet again another amazing work of art, you bring out that characteristic so well, i guess we have all experienced it before. anyway thanx for ur last comment u really think im gettin better?

Wow ! Tough one Heath. it was soo tough ! n True at the same time!

its sad to know that we need(sometiems) to be fake or fool others,i dunno,but its sad : (

nice one indeed ! nice picked up words! i liked it.

Peace,
Darla

Girl...Excellent ! enjoy ur Five : )

Peace,
Darla

This is my motto: Love will always live in our heart, As long as we love others. And Heather I love you too. You have a beautiful heart and you're so sweet. I agree with Hailie, I will never get tired of reading your poems. You are one of the best. This was another great poem, great job. Take Care my friend lol

Wow, I love the kind of bitter feeling throughout this one. Yeah, and do you know Bluehun or something? :P

good poem, keep it up :)

great work hunz
hope its not abt u......it was great keep writtin
c yaa
love yaa
peace