wow that was really a great poem. i enjoyed reading it alot!!!!

wow, thats really good, very well written & nice word choice for the ending, 5/5

woah gurl tht was some intense writing..and ur 14??? AWESOME/...i love it

great poem. very well written, i like it a lot.
-K

You make me speechless! I loved the part about the blood dripping, very intense and emotional. Keep it up! 5/5

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It was really something. Very well written and flows very well. So sad but true Im feeling the same way =( Still Great work!!! =) 5/5

That was great too. It flowed nicely and I liked it a lot. 5/5

wow i really liked that poem! its so emotional and beautifully worded!

-jenn

Very good symbolizm!!! Keep up the great work!

you have lots of talent!! keep it up!! :)

Excellent. You do have a lot of talent. Keep writing!!

Love,
Tiff

I really admired this piece. I can relate pretty well, especially to this part ...
'At the neck I'm getting hanged
Hanged by my regrets
Gasping,Suffocating'
A feeling I'll never forget"
... I wrote a poem called "The Rope Around My Neck" and those lines from your poem made me think back to it.