Interesting poem, it provokes some real thought and you wrote it well. Nice work!

It made me think very hard to do that so well done ... in the 3rd line i think it is it says "why do we feel like we must like.... i think u meant lie? it threw me for a moment but i realised what it was when i saw 'die' so yeh really liked it

great poem, and so true, alot of people think they have to be something or do something they really dont, great job!!

i like this poem becasue it is true..a lot of people seem to think that they have to hide their "real" selves...so i really liked this poem!! keep it up!! :)

thanks

Sorry about my typing today my other comments were all off on the words. Another good poem. I have learned be who u are and if people don't like it then they can stay away.